Friday 4 December 2009

First draft Script

Me and Emmaline have been working on writing a script for our film recently. The only real dialogue is right at the very start of our film when the screen is blank and so the script itself has to be very believable and able to stand alone without video to go with it. This is our first draft and we plan on developing it several times before filming, but it is useful to have something to work with when we start holding auditions, which are hopefully being held within the next week.

Script First Draft

*heavy breathing*
(muffled voices, loud door slam and the sound of a key turning in the lock)

*whispered*
female voice: f***. F***…f***...*slightly louder* f**k

*voice cracks* oh my *raises voice* God

*starts screaming/crying – panicking and hyperventilating, begging, spontaneous*

*sobbing* Let me out!

(key turns in lock again, dead silence, heart thudding noise? Door creaks open)

*whisper* no... please…please no…oh god *gets louder and louder*

(boots thudding across the room, echoes)

*screams, dies down to a humming noise*

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